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Post by Guest 10/15/2009, 7:14 pm

It was your birthday and you were alone sitting on the couch watching a movie. You sighed"Hrmmph...Su's not even here...he didn't even call...best friend my ass!"you pouted. You sat alone on the couch for about one more hour and the door bell rang. You paused the movie and opened the door"HAPPY BIRTHDAY _______ AH!!"the man squealed.
You blinked a few times"Oh...Su...thanks."
"Can I come in?"he smiled.
"Sure!"you smiled and let him in.
He walked to the small kitchen and set a white box on the island and grabbed some plates"What's that Su?"you asked.
He smiled"Cake...for tu et moi!"he smiled.
[Tu- you
et- and
Moi - me]
You giggled"Thanks Su."you smiled.
He opened the box and cut the cake"Looks yummy...right?"
"Looks...very sweet*looks at Junsu*you babo...you mostly were thinking of yourself....hrmph...meanie."you pouted.
Junsu chuckled"Come on...don't be like that."
You crossed your arms and ignored him.
"______ ah..."he called out.
You still ignored him.
Smirking he grabbed a chunk of cake and mushed it on your face"SU!"you gasped.
Junsu laughed"Ah HA HA HA!!!! CAKE FACE!!"
You pouted and did the same to him"Look who's talking!!"
You two forgot all about eating the cake and threw it at each other.
After the cake fight you both took a shower and cleaned the kitchen. When you both finished you both sat down at the couch.
"I thought you forgot my birthday Su..."you said and put your head on his shoulder.
Junsu chuckled and rubbed your arm"I would never! We've been friends for about 16 years...why would I forget your birthday?"he said.
You shrugged"I don't know...just saying."
"You're so cute...an-"
"DON'T SAY IT!"you said raising your voice.
Junsu smirked"And...VERY innocent."he said.
You pulled away and glared at him.
He chuckled"Well it's the truth."he chuckled.
Your eyebrow arched"I'm not innocent."you said.
Junsu leaned over to you"Prove it."he dared.
You smirked"Fine*pushed him against the couch making him lay down* I will..."you said and sat on top of him.
You kissed his lips and moved to his neck.
"Ahh...show me more..."Junsu moaned.
You unbuttoned his shirt and he removed your top. You kissed everywhere and undid his pants. You removed his clothes and slowly started to strip yourself which drove him crazy and the impatient Junsu ripped off your remaining clothes.
"Want more?"you cutely asked.
"Yes..."he begged.
You lowered your head to his member and gave it teasing kisses, sending him shivers. You opened your mouth and took the whole thing.
"Ah..._____ ah...shit..."he moaned"...I..I'm cumming."
As he cummed in your mouth you pulled away and kissed his lips"Am I still...VERY innocent?"you asked.
"Very..."he lied.
You sat up"Then if I can't do anything...then I'll stop."you smirked.
You motioned to get off, but Junsu flipped the two of you so you were on the bottom.
You looked at him"What are you doing, Su???"you asked giving him the 'eyes'.
Junsu groaned and roughly kissed you making your lips swollen. One by one he shoved in a finger"Ahh...Su..."you moaned.
Junsu smirked and slid his manhood in you.
"Ahh!!..."you shrieked.
Junsu stopped"You want me to stop?"he asked.
You shook your head"No...go...continue."you said.
Junsu slowly thrusted and watched the tears form. Junsu kissed them away"Want me to stop?"he asked"I don't mind...I just don't want to hu-"
"No...Ah....Su go faster..."you pleaded.
Junsu watched you in awe"Really."
Impatient you pushed him and made it so you were sitting on him. You motioned yourself up and down moaning every time. Junsu held your waist helping you"Ah...Su...I..I...I love you."you said as you felt him cum in you.
You put your head on his chest and held him"...I'm sorry."you apologized.
"Why?"he asked confused.
"...I never asked you if you wanted it...sorry Su..."
He chuckled and held your chin"Say those word again."
"I'm s-"
"No...the other ones."
You blushed"I love you."
Junsu smiled and kissed you"So do I _______ ah...for so so long..."and then you two fell asleep.

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how was it???
i know not the greatest, but I'm kinda in a rush lol

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Post by daesungvip 11/8/2009, 6:32 pm

lol, i totally can not imagine su doing that.
he seems to innocent ;__;
but this was a very cute story none the less. Very Happy
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Post by Guest 11/8/2009, 7:26 pm

daesungvip wrote:lol, i totally can not imagine su doing that.
he seems to innocent ;__;
but this was a very cute story none the less. Very Happy

lol i know it took me forever to keep a straight face...lol XD

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Post by daesungvip 11/8/2009, 7:37 pm

LOL i still can't imagine it XD
but... he's got to grow up right? XD
why is there no rated R shot with Changminnie?
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Post by Guest 11/8/2009, 8:05 pm

daesungvip wrote:LOL i still can't imagine it XD
but... he's got to grow up right? XD
why is there no rated R shot with Changminnie?

lol I'm working on that right now actually lol XD

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Post by daesungvip 11/9/2009, 2:52 pm

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT;
PM me when it's done with the link?
i'll def read it Very Happy
but i need to be noted. LOL or i probably wont find it until 5 months later >_<
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Post by Guest 11/9/2009, 3:07 pm

daesungvip wrote:WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT;
PM me when it's done with the link?
i'll def read it Very Happy
but i need to be noted. LOL or i probably wont find it until 5 months later >_<
Well I already posted it up on winglin lol but it's not that much lol only pt one is done lol XD

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Post by daesungvip 11/9/2009, 3:14 pm

o0h really?
you should post it here T_T
winglin hates my comp
it's always either lagging it
or not opening it for me :\
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Post by Guest 11/9/2009, 3:17 pm

daesungvip wrote:o0h really?
you should post it here T_T
winglin hates my comp
it's always either lagging it
or not opening it for me :\

lol okay yeah I will right now

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Post by daesungvip 11/9/2009, 5:21 pm

o0h, by the way, JA3J00NG, you should join BBSK
& post your fics up there Smile
it's now re-opened if you're intrested Very Happy
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we're trying to get it more active (:
& if you do join & need help or anything, i'm known as Michelle there Wink
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Post by pinayrevolution 12/26/2009, 7:23 pm

lmao i couldnt picture it either
but good story
~definitely the best birthday ever lol!

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