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Mental Love [R]‏



Thanks to one man you were no longer who you used to be. Thanks to one man you lost your voice...thanks to one man he broke your heart...

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You sat in the white room looking out the window. It's been two years since that indecent. The incident that changed your whole life.

FLASHBACK~

You were in the school hallway walking towards Changmin. You had on a smile to greet him with. As you were about four feet away a girl walked up to him and kissed him"Oh...hey baby."Changmin smiled and kissed her back.
You stood there watching them flirt with each other. Changmin held her waist and rocked her side to side. He looked up a little seeing you and smirked"Oppa kiss me again."the girl pleaded.
Still smirking, he deeply kissed her and you walked away from them. You carelessly walked out of the school without anyone noticing and went to the nearby park.
You looked at the matching couples ring on your ring finger. Your let your tears freely fall and took off the ring"I should've known...you idiot...they were all right...I hate you Shim Changmin."you said as you threw the ring onto the ground. You hugged your knees and softly cried.
Moments later the sky darkened and it started to rain. You let the rain hit you. As you were crying it seemed as the rain stopped and you looked up. You saw a feminine looking man look at you holding and umbrella"Something wrong?"he asked.
"Nothing."you mumbled.
He sat next to you ignoring his pants getting wet"Come on...tell me...what's wrong...I'm sure if it's something embarrassing we won't see each other in life anyways."he said.
You chuckled"So stupid."
"Come on...tell me...did something happen? Boyfriend problems??"he asked.
You sighed"Yeah..."
"What'd he do?"
"Fricken retard cheated on me...I hate him...Through what we've been together and he decides to cheat on me...ARGH!!! I HATE YOU!!"
The man rubbed your back"You can shout all you want...to your hearts content."
You stood up and took a deep breath"AHHHHHHHHHH SHIM CHANGMIN!! I HATE YOU, YOU STUPID GOOD FOR NOTHING CHEATER!!! ARRGHH!!! I HATE YOU!!!!!!! GO DROWN IN THE OCEAN!!!"you shouted.
The man looked at you and chuckled.
You continued shouting until you felt better. You caught your breath and looked at the man and smiled"Thanks a lot."
"There you go."he said.
"What?"you said confused.
"You smiled."he said then left.

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Two Weeks Later~

You arrived to your home and went to the living room"Omma...Appa...Yoochun Op-"you stopped when you saw the bodies of your parents and Oppa's dead. You dropped to your knees and started screaming"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! OMMA!!! APPA!!!! OPPA!!!!!"you cried.
You stood up and slowly approached their bodies. You breaths grew heavy and you started shaking.

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The Next Day~

'RICH FAMILY THE PARK'S COMMIT SUICIDE LEAVING DAUGHTER BEHIND AFTER COMPANY GOES BANKRUPT!'were the headlines everywhere. Later on you found out how your family became bankrupt...by the Shim's.

End of FLASHBACK~

You found out who that man was who got you over Changmin, Kim Jaejoong...or also know as the nurse in the mental hospital. Why are you in one? people wonder. Maybe because you've been quiet ever since it happened. You barely talk anymore.

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You walked out to the empty porch and sat on a chair watching the moon as you did every night. You heard the porch door open, but you didn't bother to turn around to see who it was, you already knew, but didn't bother to greet them.
"Hey there."he said.
You nodded.
"Come on...do we always gotta go through this ________ ah?? Don't give me that silent treatment."he pouted.
You looked at him for a moment"No one can resist this pout."he pointed.
You looked back at the moon.
He sighed and took out a cigarette and lit it then took a puff. You grabbed the cigerette out of his mouth"Jaejoong smoking's bad for you."you said and put it out then started to tell him facts about smoking.
Jaejoong smiled when you talked*I know...it was just to hear your voice...I stopped the first time you told me to.*he thought.
Like the normal routine you would fall asleep and Jaejoong would carry you to your room.

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You woke up and went to the classes 'they' made you take. Everyone hoped that you would maybe speak more than one or two sentences, but every time they hoped it would end up being nothing.
It was your month to do the dishes amongst the 'normal' ones. You were washing the dishes and you saw Jaejoong walk up"Need help _______ ah?"he asked.
You shook your head.
Jaejoong pouted and pointed at it"Are the only one who can resist it??"
You shrugged and continued the dishes.
"So...you'll be quiet no matter what I do??"Jaejoong said.
You nodded.
Jaejoong smirked and held your waist"How about this?"
You gasp and bit your lip. You stepped away from Jaejoong and started rinsing.
Jaejoong pouted"Not a word."

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It was noon and the patients would have visitors and they would have to go to the lounge to meet, but you never went. Why? Because who would visit you. You looked out and saw that it was raining. You opened the porch door and slowly let the rain pound against your skin. You leaned against the railing and looked down. You saw the people from yesterday who came to visit their loved ones hurry inside the building.
"________ ah! What are you doing?!"Jaejoong asked.
You looked back and shrugged.
*BOOM!*the thunder crackled.
Jaejoong smiled"Are you going to scream like last time?"he smiled.
You sighed and nodded.
Jaejoong walked over to you and lace his fingers with yours. You looked at him and he just smiled at you"Wanna do it together?"
You nodded.
"Kay...ready...you go first."
Then you both inhaled...then exhaled.
"AHH!!!! STUPID HOSPITAL!!!!! NOTHING'S WRONG WITH ME!!!"you shouted then looked at Jaejoong signaling that it was his turn.
"STUPID ITCHY UNIFORMS!!!!!"
You chuckled*Stupid.*you thought.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!"you both shouted.
After a while you two looked at each other and chuckled"Reminds me of last time."Jaejoong said.
"Yeah...kinda..."and you looked strait ahead.
Jaejoong smiled and looked ahead of himself"PARK _________!!!!...SARANGHAE!!!!!!!"
You looked at him"What?"
Jaejoong looked at you"Yeah?"
"Did I hear wrong? I thought you just said saranghae..."
Jaejoong chuckled"I did...*turns to you* Park ________...saranghae."Jaejoong said and caressed your cheeks then captured your lips.
As he kissed you, you forgot about everything all the pain and hate...you felt loved...it also seemed as you found your voice...
After a while Jaejoong held your waist"When did you find out?"you asked.
"Find what out?"he asked.
"That you liked me..."
"Well...I don't know...on April 17th the day we first met when you were crying...I felt...drawn to you."
You pulled back a little"You still remember?"you asked.
Jaejoong chuckled"Of course I would."
"Oh...Jaejoong ah..."
"Yes?"he said.
"...I'm sorry."you said.
He looked at you"What...why?"
"For...for being so quiet...for being cold."you said with a heavy voice.
Jaejoong stroked your hair"It's okay."
Then there was a knock on the door and you two pulled away from each other"_______ shhi...you have a visiter."the nurse said.
You looked at her confused"Who?"
"He told me for it to be a secret."she giggled.
You sighed and went inside"Aish! You two are so wet!"she whined.
Jaejoong looked at her and she blushed"Okay..."he said.
You walked into the lounge and the nurse showed you to your visitor.
"Here he is."she smiled.
The make turned around and hugged you"________ ah!"
You pushed him off you"Who are you?"you said as you looked at him.
He smiled"Guess."
Jaejoong laced his hands through yours eying the man.
You gasped and covered your mouth with your free hand and the man grinned.
"It's me _____ ah...Changmin."
You glared at him"What are you doing here?!"
"To see you baby."
"BABY?!! NUH UH!!!! YOU CHEATED ON ME! YOU LEFT ME FOR HER! YOU'RE THE ONE WHO BROKE MY HEART! YOU'RE THE ONE WHO MADE ME LIKE THIS!!!"you shouted.
"Come on baby...don't be like that...sh-"
"I DON'T WANNA HEAR IT!!! THANKS TO YOUR FAMILY MINE'S IS DEAD!!!! THEY'RE ALL DEAD!!!"you cried as you held on tightly to Jaejoong's hand.
"______ ah baby...don't be like this."
You fell back and blocked yourself"STAY AWAY!!! I HATE YOU!!!"you shouted.
Changmin took a step towards you and Jaejoong punched him in the face"BACK OFF! YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO COME SEE HER!!! YOU CHEATED ON HER AND TOOK AWAY HER PARENTS AND AFTER TWO YEARS OF LEAVING HER ALONE YOU STILL HAVE THE DAMN GUTS TO COME BACK TO TALK TO HER!!!"
Changmin looked at him"Who the hell are you?"
"Her boyfriend."Jaejoong said and carried you bridal style. You hugged his neck"Thank you Jaejoong."you whispered in his ear.

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Jaejoong was in the laundry room drying off his clothes and you walked in.
"Jaejoong...are you done?"you said as you looked for him.
You turned around and saw him only wearing a loose towel around his waist.
"Oh! sorry!"you blushed and turned your head to the side.
Jaejoong walked closer to you and you backed away. There was a small counter that hit your back and you were trapped. Jaejoong held you up and set you on the counter. He put both of his hands on either side of you. You bit your lip and tried to hid your face with your bangs. Jaejoong brushed them away and held your chin, making you look him straight in the eye. He leaned down towards your lips and gently kissed them. He stopped kissing you and moved down to your neck and going lower"Nughh...Jaejoong we're moving too fast."you stuttered.
Jaejoong looked up at you"We've known each other for about two year though ________ ah."
"B...But we didn't talk much."you said.
"Your name is Park _______ "
*removes your shirt*
"Birth date is January 28...two days after mines."
*kisses the top of your breast*
"Favorite color is blue."
*undoes your pants*
"Favorite flower is cherry blossoms."
*unclasps bra*
"You don't like sweets."
*removes your bra*
"Favorite animal is a panda."
*takes off your pants*
"Favorite number is 17 also the same number date we met."he said and removed your underwear"Also...you're 18 which makes you legal."he smirked.
"How'd y-"
"Because I know you."he said still smirked.
"B..But I don't know you..that well."you stuttered.
Jaejoong spread your legs"My name is Kim Jaejoong."
*inserts a finger in your hole and you twitched*
"My birth date is January 26."
*takes off towel*
"My favorite color is red."
*inserts second finger and you bit your lip.*
"Nuughhh..."
"My favorite flower are lilies."
*inserts third finger*
You gasped and clutched onto his hair.
"My favorite animals are dogs."
*brings you closer to him.*
"Favorite number is 2."
*enters you*
"Gahh...J...Jaejoong...."you moaned.
*thrusts in and out*
"I'm TOTALLY legal...24."he said.

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You were sitting in between Jaejoong's legs playing with your thumbs"....I'm gust gonna put on my clothes..."you said as you stood up.
Jaejoong looked at you"Kay...My clothes are probably dry too."he said and stood up.
You two put on your clothes and held hands"...Jaejoong..."
"Yeah?"he said.
"...Saranghae..."you said.
Jaejoong smiled and captured your lips"Saranghae ________ ah."

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Within the week you were released and you lived with Jaejoong.

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One Year Later~

"_______ ah hurry up!"Jaejoong said.
"YAH!! I'm coming!"you said and walked to the car.
You arrived at the cemetery with three bouquets. You took a deep breath and walked over to your omma's, appa's, and oppa's grave.
"Hey guys*puts them down* how are you?? I brought my fiance."you smiled and held Jaejoong's hand.
"Hello...I'm ______ ah's fiance...thank you for raising a beautiful girl like her..."Jaejoong smiled.
After a while you looked at your watch"Jaejoong we've been here for a while...we should get going...I need to pick up my wedding dress too."you said.
Jaejoong nodded and you two left.
You laced your fingers through Jaejoong's"Jaejoong...I'm sorry."
"Huh? Why?"he asked.
You sighed"You never got to see them..."you said"...I wish you could."
Jaejoong kissed your hand"It's okay _______ ah..."
You looked at him and smiled"...Saranghae."
Jaejoong chuckled"Saranghae...*sigh*...can't wait for you to become Mrs. Kim."he smiled.
You giggled and kissed him"Neither can I."

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Post by Kyn 8/11/2009, 11:18 pm

i'm moving this to the FF section

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Post by daesungvip 11/8/2009, 7:02 pm

"I'm TOTALLY legal...24."he said.

LOL THAT MADE ME LAUGH.
it's funny the way i pictured it. LMFAOOOOO.
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this was so sweet ! Very Happy
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