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Post by DBSK_mylover_123 on 7/27/2009, 3:23 pm

hi i am the girl who wrote we chose the wrong girl, in this story dbsk is not a band they are in high school.
hope you like it

chapter 1 first day of school

today was the first day of grade 10, Jaejoong saw alot of boys surounding you "hot girl" Jaejoong whisperd to himself, "no one can try to flirt to with her" Yunho warned and tried to flirt with you.

Then you saw Jaejoong standing by homself so lonly "what a cute boy" you thoughted, the you walked to him and tickled him under the chin "what's your name cutie?" you asked

"Jaejoong" he answerd shyly Embarassed looking on ground "oh...i'm ~~" you said in a sxy voice then put your hand on his hip and you 2 were about to kiss when the stupid bell rang

"I HATE THAT STUPID BELL! you shouted Jaejoong smiled then quickly kissed you and rean away then you went to class.

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Post by Jaemin on 7/27/2009, 3:39 pm

*o* is it a « you » story type? Wee! I love The shy Jaejoong. And the mean Yunnie lol. And wow. What a 'sexy' caracter type lol.

Update soon new chapter !
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Post by DBSK_mylover_123 on 7/28/2009, 10:43 am

chapter 2: love class

when you went to class Jaejoong was sitting beside you but he didn't notice it, you grabbed his chin and turned it facing you "yo" you said sounding like a baby in a sweet voice.

then a girl walked to Jaejoong and said "hey Jaejoong after school come to my house for dance (hip pop) class, and bring your little girlfriend beside u" she smirked "ooo~i would love to be your girlfreind" you sqealed "then would you?" Jaejoong asked "ok..." u answerd

then the teacher came in her name is mrs. lu our science teacher, while the teacher starts teaching u and Jaejoong plays together then the teacher saw , why r those 2 already flirting? she thoughted.

you 2 played until lunch time rrriiinnnggg went the bell "bye" said the teacheryou went to the cafateria while holding Jaejoongs hand. you sat down on a table with him, "~~i will go buy lunch for u and i said Jaejoong then left.

Yunho sat infront of you "hey hottie" he said then Jaejoong came back with 2 trays of food "get your ass off this chair" he said then you laughed

Yunho stand up grabbed another chair and dragged it besied you and sat on it "and i mean not beside my baby too!" Jaejoong warned "OK FINE!" Yunho shouted and left.

"here ~~ try these their good" Jaejoong said pushing to tray to you "mmmm this is yummy" you said "of course it is 'cause i picked it for you " Jaejoong smirked

"i thought you were really shy" you said "oh... i'm only brave to you" he said then kissed you.

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Post by Jaemin on 7/28/2009, 3:31 pm

WAAH >.< So cute!
Jaejoongie protecting his girlfriend... So fast it came up demanding for being one loool

updat soon
(hope my message don't bugg)
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Post by DBSK_mylover_123 on 7/28/2009, 8:53 pm

chapter 3 being hate

when school ends you went to the park with Jaejoong, a guy grabbed you by the arm and coverd your mouth.

then the other ones gather around Jaejoong and start punching a kicking him.

you pushed the guy away then start to punch and kick the others "are you ok oppa?" you asked "i think so" he replied "NO ONE CAN YOU OUT WITH ~~ 'XEPT FOR ME!" A GUY SHOUTED "shut up" you growl then bring Jaejoong away. "can i go to your place?" he asked

"sure" you said sweetly

At home...

you helped Jaejoong whiped the blood off his bloody face and put a bandade on them

Jae: ouch Sad

you: where?

Jae: that big brues on my face and my puffed up lips

you smirked "you look sexy like that you said then kissed him on the lips "don't do that it hurts" he said

"but it's yummy" you teased "wow being hate get hurt so easily" he said " i kno" you answerd
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Post by Jaemin on 7/28/2009, 8:59 pm

Naah Not weird <3

I just like the text kissing jaejoong ! ~ But kind of mean... I 'mean' kissing him right way when he's hurt.. Poor Baby =L
Update soon ~~~~~
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Post by DBSK_mylover_123 on 7/28/2009, 9:15 pm

chapter 4 i for got

Jae: oh no

you: what's wrong?

Jae: i gorgot i promised lily i go to her house for dance (hippop) class

you we can go now

lilys house...

"what's wrong with you? lily asked "don't metion it" said jae in a painful voice "you can't dance looking like that" lily added

"I SAID DON'T MENTION IT! Jaejoong shouted just then Jaejoong phone rang, you picked it up

you:hello?

a guy: hi tell Jaejoong he forgot that he has to come fix my computer

you no he is staying home and rest

then you turned the phone off
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Post by Jaemin on 7/28/2009, 9:33 pm

TT.TT

*back off people * XD

Well. They gotta let Jaejoongie rest a bit, since the battle, he isn't really well,no?
*cross fingers*

Update soon * ^^ Very Happy
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Post by DBSK_mylover_123 on 7/28/2009, 9:39 pm

chapter 5: satyng with you//my body guard?

when you bought Jaejoong home his mom told him to go aways 'cause he's waisting money,

"can i stay with you?" he asked "sure" you said"and i'll guard you just incase"

Jaejoong laughed and ruffled you hair

when you got home Jaejoong went to sleep then you helped him put his clothes and stuff away,

and went to sleep on the floor, Jaejoong pulled you up "don't sleep on the floor it's hard and cold" he said.

you slept beside him for the rest of the night
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Post by DBSK_mylover_123 on 7/29/2009, 5:10 pm

chapter 6 :singing contest

Jaejoong pov

the next day i woke up and saw ~~ still sleeping so i sang a sone to wake her up "nice song"she said. end

when you just got school the bell rang so you have no time to play

CLASS...

when the teacher came in she heard you humming a song "ok class i thought of something special today and it's a singing contest and we will start with Jaejoong"she said

he sang ride on and on the "drive me crazy tonight" phrase he sang it staring at you

you sang 2ne1 pretty boy. then the teacher got to a girl name Lucy she sang snsd GEE! "EWWWWWWWW" said the kids and the teacher...

soon it was done "now the winner is ~~ and Jaejoong!" she said then the boys claped for you (not Jaejoong) and the girls claped for Jaejoong(not you)

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yeah ewwww snsd hey check 2ne1 it's awsome (to me) COMMENTS PLEASE!

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Post by DBSK_mylover_123 on 7/29/2009, 5:19 pm

chapter 7:intterupted

at lunch Lucy slamed her hand on the table you and Jaejoong were at

"why did you say ewww when i sang?" she growl "by the way no one can steal my Jaejoong" she added

you smirked then climed on the table and start kissing him till she walk away,

but she didn't so Jaejoong pushed you on the table then the teacher came

"please this is the cafateria" she said Jaejoong smirked "please no intterruptions next time" he said sounding like a baby,

"HAHA how cute" you laughed then tickled him under the chin, he grabbed your risk and start kissing you again

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Post by DBSK_mylover_123 on 7/29/2009, 5:35 pm

chapter 8 pervert.

after school you went to the park without Jaejoong 'cause he went to lilys,

when you put down your backpack, yunho grabbed your arm then took you to his secret place,

he pushed you on the wall and leaned on you "what do you want?" you asked he puted his fingers on your lips thenleaned on you harder and start kissing you on the neck to cheek to lips

"hey" you shouted he slided his right hand in your jeans and grabbed your ass and his left hand slowly unbuckled your jeans "don't" you shouted again but he ignore you.

he took his hand out of your jeans then from rubbing your thigh to your breast.

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Post by DBSK_mylover_123 on 7/29/2009, 5:44 pm

chapter 9 chat

when you got home Jaejoong was waitng for you.

Jae:where have you been?

you:at the park

jae: why is you jeans unbuckled?

you: if forgot (buckling it up)

you walk in your room and Jaeoppa followed you

Jae:are you hidding something from me?

you: no

Jae: Lucy told me and i know what happend

you:what?

Jae:you and yunho

you: it's not like what you think lucy just lies to you because she is jelouse and she want to go out with you

Jae: then what's the truth?

you: yunho took me to a place then you know what happend...but i didn't do it i just tried to escape.

Jaeoppa hugged you "why don't you just tell me the truth? don't habe to lie" he whisperd wrapping his arm around you waist

"sorry" you mumbled

"it's ok" he answerd kissing you on the cheek

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Post by DBSK_mylover_123 on 7/29/2009, 7:23 pm

chapter10 :going to the club//can't control

the next day was saturday you woke up and made Jaejoongs favorite breakfast, Jaejoong woke up and wraped his arms around your waist

"i wanna go the the club tonight" he said"sure"you asnwerd "now eat your breakfast while i go pick my clothes for tonght" you added "ok mommy" Jaejoong said sounding like a baby.

you went to your room and pick out a mini skirt just covoured you ass, white long blouse, showing you curvy ass, nice long legs and your beautiful body.

when you went out Jaejoongs eyes got wide at you and jaw droped "con you stop giving me that face?" you laughed.he pushed you on the couch and start kissing you

AT THE CLUB...*slightly rated*

when you arrived at the club you saw yunho.

yunho pov i saw ~~ standing beside Jaejoong and dancing with him I looked at her clothes and licked my lips.

i need to think of a plan to get Jaejoong out of the way.end

yunho told one of his friends to let Jaejoong eat this. "~~have fun i'm going to go home i don't feel good" he said and left

yunho walked to you holding a cup of jiuce "here want some juice?" he asked but didn't wait for you to answer and made you drink it.

after you drink it, you felt your body on fire and without noticing your body helped you took off your shirt and now you were only wearing a bra, everyone looked at you "sexy" yunho smirked, now you can't control yourself, you danced with yunho.

then yunho took you into a room. you were all sweaty so you took your skirt off, yunho pushed you on your bed with all his energy and start licking his lips.

he quickly layed down on you and start kissing you he took his shirt and pants off, "so hot" you said "take it off" yunho smirked but you didn't hear him so he took your bra and panties off for you.

IT'S SO HOT ING HEAR!" you shouted and start kissing Yunho, yunho took off his underwear. you fliped around and sat on him and start bouncing up and down he looked at you brest bouncing up and down too, he fliped you over and start kissing you

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sorry if you don;t like it i just did it randomly and i'm not good at story's but i wish you like my stories i wrote so far COMMENTS PLEASE!

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Post by DBSK_mylover_123 on 7/30/2009, 12:24 pm

chapter 11 headache

the next day you woke up with a terrible headache and you knew this wasn't your house, then yunho came in

Jaejoong pov

i waited for ~~to come hom when i heard the door sound i pretendto sleep,end

whne you came home you saw Jaejoong sleeping then he opend his eyes.

Jae:where were you?

you:at my friends house.

Jae:ok

you:i'm going to sleep i have a headache.

Jae: yesterday you told me you have an apointment,

you:oh yeah bye,

doctors...

you asked the doctor if you had a baby 'cause you don't want one with yunho "no" said the doctor very confused

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