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Woah!! Poor JJ!!! Did he really faint?? Ah..can't wait for an update ^^

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Post by shawty_12 on 7/20/2009, 8:02 pm

this sounds good so far. i'll be back to read it, all right?Very Happy
still had to finish the other two chapters. so i will come back and do a full reply.


okay i'm back and i've finally catch up with the story. it's quite funny and mysterious^^
i wonder who that beautiful girl is. and what happened to yui?! he sure was acting strange.
uh...next time, do you mind translating some words? 'cause i can't understand japanese>.<
anyways, keep up with the work-i'll be waiting for the next update!Very Happy
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Bleeding Heart

Post by vivilee on 10/4/2009, 7:40 pm

Chapter 03: Reality or Fantasy


It’s unbelievably warm, comfortable and peaceful.

The atmosphere of my surrounding was calming and silent until it was interrupted by a breathing sound getting louder and louder by the minute. I opened my heavy eyes realizing I was covered in an enormous blanket and that I was lying down on the floor with my head on top of a soft pillow. I turned my head in all angles possible to investigate where the sound was coming from but all I could perceive was plain white walls. Then, I lifted myself up and instantly I saw her, Aya, sitting in the corner with crossed legs and one arm holding the head and the other supporting the other arm’s elbow to prevent it from falling. Her back was slouched and her head was facing down with closed eyes.

It took a few second to become aware of that she was also sleeping only in a very very uncomfortable position. I didn’t want to disturb her from her rest but I was distressed by her position of sleeping so I stood up swiftly away from the blanket and walked on the tip of my toes to her side.

From then on I wasn’t sure how to get her from where she was to the place where I was comfortably sleeping earlier. It also didn’t make it any easier looking at her. The feeling of seeing her is something I wouldn’t feel normally when I see a person. It was a kind of feeling where your heartbeat seems to beat faster than it’s normal rate and you just cannot get enough of the sight because you are stunned by its beauty. The funny thing is that before I thought this kind of feelings only existed in movies but I guess I was wrong.

I wasn’t comfy about this feeling at all. It makes me feel confused and nervous every single time I would look at her but it was just so damn hard to keep my eyes away from her irresistible self.

‘You know if only I could talk in Japanese so fluently the first time I saw you the first words I would have told you would have to be that you are strikingly beautiful.’ I whispered to myself softly.

I walked back to my bed and grabbed the blanket to put around her knowing she was somewhat shivering from the cold. I maneuvered my hands carefully to her back while covering it with the blanket. Then I took the pillow and put it on the side of the wall just above her shoulder so she could lean on it in great comfort although she was still sitting, the view of her stance was now bearable and it made ease to my discomfort.

‘What should I do now? I have to contact Yui and tell him where I am before he kills himself from worrying about me.’ I told myself in a quiet voice.

I walked forward a doorway to get out of the room. I slid the door gently on the side and closed it again as I got out. I looked on my left hand side and all I could find was a massive space of room. Also, the structure of the room was so organized that it felt like I was living in paradise. The walls were white as the sky and the sweet aroma smell of the atmosphere lingered on me coating me in comfort and serenity.

As I walked forward outside a wide porch constructed neatly in set of lustrous woods I began to worry again. I didn’t know what to do or how I am going to even contact Yui. I stood there recollecting my thoughts to gain some kind of solution for this situation I was in. Without getting anything I started to kick aimlessly, I scratched my head in annoyance and sat on the wooden porch like a little kid with my knees folded and my hands on my feet.

“I can’t believe this happening to me! AISH! Seriously…. How more unfortunate can I get???” I told myself in high-pitch then out of the blue a polite voice responded.

“Daijoubu desu ka?” Aya questioned with her delectable eyes worriedly focused onto mine.
I stood up quickly and faced her flustered. “Ah~ yeah~ I’m ok…” I paused for a second and looked at her momentarily.

She responded with a soft smile and said, “I’m... go… to the the shopu… You want… tu come??” while pointing with her finger towards the direction of where the shops are.

I tried to articulate what she had just said for a second and replied, “Ah! Hai~ Yes… of course” I put my left arm behind my head and patted it softly to shake off my worries of being lost giving her a friendly smile.

It’s noon now and the sun was glistering its warmth above us while we walked to the nearby shops. We couldn’t talk to each other that much as it was hard for us to do so on our way but we manage to change smiles and glances instead.

‘Maybe I can call the hotel and tell them to tell Yui that I’m here.’ I thought to myself while Aya was looking over the curvy hills and green plains of the placid village.

“Ah!” Aya shrieked and pointed out to a small fruit shop.

It was an assurance that we’ve finally reached our destination after a ten-minute walk. Straight away Aya hesitantly approached the little fruit shop and went it. I was mesmerized by the many colors of the fruits standing outside the shop. They all looked ripened and luscious so I followed Aya inside with my back was slightly hunched due to the reason that the shop was small and I was tall not to fit in with my back straight.
Aya was smiling and giggling while talking to the old lady who was the owner of the shop. I couldn’t translate what they were saying but I was able to hear something I didn’t expect to hear… that made me grin widely.

I heard something like… ‘Aya-chan… Who’s this boy with you? Boyfriend?’ but I didn’t hear what Aya’s response was as I just tilted my head down for a soft chortle and walked away.

Aya soon came out of the shop with a handful of bags with numerous of fruits inside. I instantly offered my hand without a word and helped her, taking all the bags she was holding. We walked a little further only to find a store selling crushed iced drinks, which I thought was great, as it would complement with the warm weather.

“Aya… would you… like to have a… drink??” I told her while physically translating it to her with both of my hands.

“Hai~!” She happily answered.

I escorted her to a seat nearby first that was ten meters away and placed the bag of goods beside her. Quickly, I ran to the front of the store to get the drinks but forgotten to ask her what she wanted so went back. In curiosity, I found her surrounded with five guys varying in all shapes and lengths. Two of them were tall and skimpy and the others where short but bulky. As I got closer to them Aya shouted, “AHHH~ Don’t ttouchh… ME!!!!” The moment I heard that I didn’t back down and calmly asked one of the guys to remove his hand from Aya’s wrists.

“Hey! Do not touch her please~” I told them while I walked in front of her to defend her but the short guy was too arrogant to let her go so I took his hand off from Aya with force and tried to break through them so we could leave.

The five of them laughed wickedly behind us then the two tall guys held me back locking both sides of my shoulders and my fists to attack them. They were both strong and fast so I couldn’t do anything to help Aya. The other two grabbed Aya and dragged her to a corner while she was shouting in panic. I looked around for help but the people around us were too scared or too traumatized to help. The smallest of them all was probably the leader of some kind of gang. He stood in front of with a smirk sketched on his scarred face and pulled out a cigarette from a pocket of his black-leathered jacket. He then started smoking exhaling the smoke to my face purposely. Inhaling the smog I couldn’t help but choke on the thick smoke that was covering my face and just as I was about to say something to him he started to beat the crap out of me. I could feel the intense pain on my stomach and chest getting sharper and sharper as he continuously punched me in great power. Moving upwards he hit me incredulously and spat on my face like a total maniac.

All three of them were laughing as they enjoyed taking advantage of me. I could hear Aya shouting from afar struggling to escape from the hands of the other two members of the gang. I was embarrassed mentally when I saw her looking at me seeing what I was going through but I was more worried that they might do something to her.
With that inside my head I regained all my physical power I needed to fight back even though I was already beaten heavily and bleeding everywhere. I shouted a big groan and while at it I jumped and kicked the leader with all my might. With success he moans in pain on the ground struggling to breathe. The other two who was holding me tried to help him but with me broken free I became madly in rage so I started attacking them from behind.

I used every technique I was thought with in martial arts so I kicked and punched and hit every single one of them to the ground. After a few minutes it was their turn to groan from the pain they have given me at first. As I got closer to them three they all ran away in agony with bleeding noses and mouths. Then I searched for Aya finding her all alone already. I was in real mess and was extremely tired so I walked to her slowly to see if she was hurt anywhere or if something happened to her. I couldn’t catch my breath to ask her but she told me gently that she was fine even though I could tell that she wasn’t.

“Anata wa…” she spoke.

In silence I smiled at her in response and nodded mildly even though I was feeling hazy then I turned around with my back on her and knelt down. I was offering her to give her a lift on my back as I noticed her feet and knees grazed with wounds from earlier when she was getting dragged to the corner but I don’t think she understood what I was doing so instead I made the move and got her to my back in an instance.

She was as light as a feather so I didn’t mind holding the bags full of fruits that she had bought earlier. Though tired and traumatized we went back to her home.

Again it was quiet on our way back. I tilted my head a little to ask and see how see was doing but she was already sleeping. Her calm breathing aid my pain and wounds on my chest and with her head leaning against mine made me feel warm and content for some reason. I couldn’t resist the moment so I smiled while looking to her side and even her arms around me made me realized that she somewhat trusts me. My heart thumped radically as I think of these things and it made me happy because that’s when I know that I’m starting to like someone.

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Bleeding Heart: Chapter 4

Post by vivilee on 10/11/2009, 3:24 am

Chapter 04: Weird Feelings


Her scent has captured me completely. I wanted to stay like these with her for a while but we were getting near her house. I walked a few second slower to cherish the moment with her. Inside I felt strange… I’ve only met her and already she makes me feel like I can’t get enough of her. Sweating and hyperventilating at the same time I could not resist looking at her once again on the side. With one big gulp I turned my head on the side once again observing her white flawless vitrified skin but she couldn’t get any more alluring with her rosy cheeks that made her look so vulnerable on my shoulders.

As I face forward a metal pole had emerged out of nowhere hitting me on the nose and leaving me severe pain. Luckily, Aya was still asleep on my back and didn’t notice my clumsiness resurfacing again.

“Aishhhh~!’ I complained, as my eyes got teary from the pain. I could feel my nose getting warm and runny then I could taste the rusty metallic substance on the tip of my lips. I knew then that my nose was bleeding.

I immediately held my right arm to wipe it off but with the attempt Aya had woken up. I squatted down a little so she could get off my back with ease, as I didn’t want her to hurt anywhere else.

“Are you ok to walk?” I said with my sincere bass voice as I turned myself to her.

Without an answer she placed her thumb just below my nose and rubbed off the blood with her bare hand. She then positioned her other hand on the side of my head and grab my head gently towards her. I being oblivious to the situation I just followed and bent my shoulders just as she wanted me to. I looked at her at peace but was a little nervous. With her intense yet seductive gaze she came closer to me and gave me a sweet everlasting kiss on my left cheek and whispered a thank you as she let me go.

Mixed emotion arose within me. I didn’t know what to say so I just gave her a light smile. She smiled back and seized one of my wrists to her house immediately.

She sat me down on the lounge and left me for a bit. As she returned she was holding a small bag. She holds it up for me to see clearly and I recognized it was a first aid bag.

She asked me verbally with the guidance of physical actions to take my white shirt off so she could clean and aid my wounds. Hesitant at first I ended up doing it and started undoing the buttons. I loosen my shirt down and I could feel the heat suppressing around my cheeks and my upper body.

Then, we met each other’s glances and although the atmosphere around us was silent it was seriously intense, as I never had a close interaction with a girl this close before. She was a source of power that electrified me throughout in every single vein inside my body.

Aya started off with my upper right chest. I wasn’t sure if she could feel my heart trembling with her flesh against mine but I sat there as quiet as possible while looking at my wound and her indescribable expression. She looked as worried as a mother somehow and it made me allured to her more.

My grazes weren’t that severe but because I had a lot I had to moan and groan while she cleaned them thoroughly with a little force. As she was about to finish putting the bandage around my chest a sudden aching pain occurred from the very back of my head.

I trembled in pain and struggled to keep my composure then I closed my eyes tightly and put my arms around the back of my head to comfort it. With Aya on my side I didn’t want to exacerbate her worries so after a few second I sat upright and continued to smile as if nothing had happen although I was not sure where the pain or how the pain came about. Aya looked kind of scared and so I reassured her with my answer.

“I’m Ok~ I think I have a migraine but I’m ok. I’m healthy as ever!” I nodded and pulled a quirky face to make her laugh and she did.

It was my turn to aid her and comfort her so I reached for the first aid bag and found different kinds of ointments and bandages situated neatly in rows. I took hold of her left leg and immediately assist her with her wounds. Slowly and carefully I dug down the wound on her knees with the ointment to prevent it from getting infected.

Clean, refresh and covered with bandages we both stood outside the porch with a cup of tea on our stiff hands and sat down on the stool outside. The smell of the wind was like a sweet cure to our wounds as the icy air that surrounded us soothes it. The peaceful night has taken over the light with countless stars shimmering up above us.

I murmured, “I’m sincerely sorry…” pause, “I’m sorry I have to barge in to your house like this… Thank you so much for your hospitality… but tomorrow morning I will head off.”

She nodded quietly.

To be honest I didn’t want to leave her but I felt that it was enough that I could stay at her house for tonight. While beside her I sat in silence frustrated that I could not talk to her comfortably so I drifted off mentally and thought about other things like how I’m going to return to Yui. However, clouded with mesmerizing smiles and gazes I couldn’t think of any other things but this one girl sitting just five inches away from me. With just those simple thoughts my pulse rate started to rise again as my heart quickly trembles.

Unknowingly, I realized that she was leaning her head on my pale shoulders. I didn’t move a single nerve as soon as I found out that she was already asleep.

*thumped… thumped… thumped…* My heart silently says.

Without even thinking appropriately though cautious of my movements towards her I held one of her palm and covered them with both of my hands for warmth then slowly placing them just above my chest where my heart pulsates steadily underneath my frail looking skin.

“I don’t know what this is… but I do know that its you whose making it.” I mumbled.

“I’ve only met you just hours ago but you’ve struck me like crazy with every single happy expression your face would throw at me and with every touch or conversation we had a throbbing sensation would suddenly generate within me and now that we are like this sitting together with your head against me my body starts to weaken…” I paused as I told her as softly as possible knowing that she wouldn’t hear me anyway as I look at her in peace.

I looked up and resumed with my speech, “ …because I think I’m starting to fall for you quietly.”

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Yui is so funny!! He has an adorable personality in this fic. ^^

Poor JJ though, he went through so much with Aya. He needs to leanr Japanese!!

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Aww...that was so sweet!!! JJ telling her how she feels without knowing she's listening!! ^^

I really like your story and thanks for the uodate. I'm sure others are reading, just silently Very Happy

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