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Im Too Young~~ DBSK STORY

Post by Riku on 6/18/2009, 3:05 pm

PLZ PLZ PLZ visit this site if u want to read my fanfic http://winglin.net/fanfic/dbsk_Y2J/

Forewords:
12 year old, Riku was living a normal life until one day, her world dramatically changes. She notices a huge crowd running towards her. There were five of them. Tall, dark and handsome. She notices one of them isn't looking where they were going and tumbles her to the ground. All five of them stop and try to escape. There was nothing to do. They plead for her help and she does so. To Riku's surprise, she had just helped the all time number one most popular Korean Boy Band, DBSK. They were hoping that they could get a vacation in the Philippines without anybody noticing. As time goes by they start to hang out but not only that. They start to develop feelings for her....
Hero doesn't show his affections, Yunho becomes very playful, Changmin acts very shy and does not know what to do for it is his first love, Junsu is just... plain Junsu. xD And Yoochun. Out of all of them his love because the most unique. Love and hate. That is their relationship for their age is so far apart. Will this love work? Who will she pick in the end? Can love conquer all? Let's just see how it ends.

If u think its interesting just visit the site at the top of the page! i would love if people would read this story.

and if u do read it plz plz plz comment i would appreciate it Very Happy

THANK YOU *bow* lol!

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Re: Im Too Young~~ DBSK STORY

Post by Kyn on 6/18/2009, 3:36 pm

Riku wrote:PLZ PLZ PLZ visit this site if u want to read my fanfic http://winglin.net/fanfic/dbsk_Y2J/

Forewords:
12 year old, Riku was living a normal life until one day, her world dramatically changes. She notices a huge crowd running towards her. There were five of them. Tall, dark and handsome. She notices one of them isn't looking where they were going and tumbles her to the ground. All five of them stop and try to escape. There was nothing to do. They plead for her help and she does so. To Riku's surprise, she had just helped the all time number one most popular Korean Boy Band, DBSK. They were hoping that they could get a vacation in the Philippines without anybody noticing. As time goes by they start to hang out but not only that. They start to develop feelings for her....
Hero doesn't show his affections, Yunho becomes very playful, Changmin acts very shy and does not know what to do for it is his first love, Junsu is just... plain Junsu. xD And Yoochun. Out of all of them his love because the most unique. Love and hate. That is their relationship for their age is so far apart. Will this love work? Who will she pick in the end? Can love conquer all? Let's just see how it ends.

If u think its interesting just visit the site at the top of the page! i would love if people would read this story.

and if u do read it plz plz plz comment i would appreciate it Very Happy

THANK YOU *bow* lol!

Hey it would be awesome if you could post the story here in the forum, instead of just the link. I hope when you have the time chapter one will be up ^^.

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Re: Im Too Young~~ DBSK STORY

Post by Riku on 6/18/2009, 5:58 pm

Kyn wrote:
Riku wrote:PLZ PLZ PLZ visit this site if u want to read my fanfic http://winglin.net/fanfic/dbsk_Y2J/

Forewords:
12 year old, Riku was living a normal life until one day, her world dramatically changes. She notices a huge crowd running towards her. There were five of them. Tall, dark and handsome. She notices one of them isn't looking where they were going and tumbles her to the ground. All five of them stop and try to escape. There was nothing to do. They plead for her help and she does so. To Riku's surprise, she had just helped the all time number one most popular Korean Boy Band, DBSK. They were hoping that they could get a vacation in the Philippines without anybody noticing. As time goes by they start to hang out but not only that. They start to develop feelings for her....
Hero doesn't show his affections, Yunho becomes very playful, Changmin acts very shy and does not know what to do for it is his first love, Junsu is just... plain Junsu. xD And Yoochun. Out of all of them his love because the most unique. Love and hate. That is their relationship for their age is so far apart. Will this love work? Who will she pick in the end? Can love conquer all? Let's just see how it ends.

If u think its interesting just visit the site at the top of the page! i would love if people would read this story.

and if u do read it plz plz plz comment i would appreciate it Very Happy

THANK YOU *bow* lol!

Hey it would be awesome if you could post the story here in the forum, instead of just the link. I hope when you have the time chapter one will be up ^^.

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Kyn

Umm yeah sure i think i can do that hehe Very Happy

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Chapter 1~First Meeting

Post by Riku on 6/18/2009, 10:21 pm

Riku's Point of View;;

RIINNNGGG!!!!
"Aww man I'm late again!! I hope she's not mad." I said in a worried tone.
As soon as I came into the classroom the teacher says, "Riku this is the 5th time you have been late!! As punishment you will have to run 5 laps after school!! Understand?" said the teacher angrily
"Understood." I replied to her back.
I silently walked to my desk without looking at anyone but I knew the class was trying to hold in their laughter ...
"Great another day with me getting embarrassed" I murmured.

Later after school I was doing my punishment like my teacher asked me. Running. 5. Yes 5 laps around the whole entire field. If you knew me you would know that I am not. And I repeat am not, an athletic person. I run pretty slowly but not too slow.
"Man, I wish I was done already." I said gasping for air.
I was almost done. I only had 2 more laps to go when suddenly I see a huge crowd heading my way. I stopped to see what it was all about. I noticed the huge crowd was getting closer and closer. By the looks of it, it looked like they were running. At an incredible fast pace too. As I was trying to get a way...
BOOM.
One of them bumped into me, and tumbled me to the ground.
“Arayko” I said painfully
I’m guessing he didn’t see me there because he wasn’t looking where he was going. Well I don’t blame him he was trying to get away from a huge crowd, I thought.
"I’m Sorry. Sorry." He said.
"Hurry up Yoochun!! We have to go!!" said one of the guys.
Oh, so his name is Yoochun....
"Ok hyung!!" he shouted back "I’m sorry again. You aren’t hurt anywhere right?"
"No, its ok. I’m fine." I said.
"Jaejoong, we can’t do this anymore everyone is too tired. We can never get away from that huge crowd." said another guy.
The rest nodded their heads.
"Can you please help us. We have to hide. Please, we really need your help" says Yoochun
I get up quickly and say, "Okay get in here, quickly" I pointed to a window which led to a classroom.
All five of them started going through the window as soon as I noticed the crowd getting closer, I said,
"Hurry up, guys! They are right there!"
All of them make it in just in time when one of the girls from the crowd asked,
"Hey have you seen 5 guys? You know tall, cute, handsome, and gorgeous smiles??"
I replied,
"Umm yeah I think they went that way, outside the school gates. "
"THANK YOU SO MUCH!!" said all of them.
As they dashed outside of the school I jumped through the window to find the 5 mysterious boys.
"Okay guys they are gone. It’s safe now. " I shouted.
“You guys okay? Who were those people? Where did you guys come from?”
Yoochun says laughing, "Thanks for your help. I’m Micky Yoochun. Nice to meet you"
"I’m Riku, nice too meet you as well" I said while reaching for his hand to shake it.
"And I’m Xiah Junsu"
"Hero Jaejoong"
“Max Changmin"
"and I’m U-know Yunho" as they said all bowing.
Wow, these guys are really cute, I thought to myself.
Wait what am I thinking. I shook my head lightly.
I smiled softly and answered, "Nice to meet you guys"
They smiled back.
Oh god, those girls were right they do have gorgeous smiles. Oh there I go again day dreaming too much. Oh wait a minute I never asked them why they were being chased, I thought.
"Why were those people chasing you guys??"
They exchanged strange looks at one another.
"Don’t you know who we are??" asked the tallest one, Changmin.
I stood there dumbfounded.
Who are these guys...

FLASHBACK

"Dude you have got to see these guys they are like the #1 most popular Korean band ever! My cousin giggles
"Yeah sure whatever. Who is it this time? Is it that band called Super Humor? Or something like that?"
“No! The band is called Dong Bang Shin Ki. DBSK for short. And its Super Junior!!"

END OF FLASH BACK

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Re: Im Too Young~~ DBSK STORY

Post by Kyn on 6/19/2009, 4:49 am

I've already merged your topics for the story I'm Too Young~, but in the future please put all parts of your story under one thread. This is to keep the forum organized and helps readers find your entire story. Instead of making a new thread for a new chapter, reply to the original post. If you have any questions feel free to PM me or one of the other mods, or you can always ask your question nin the Questions/Feedback section.

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