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Obsessed (Main Characters: Kim So Eun and Kim Bum)

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Re: Obsessed (Main Characters: Kim So Eun and Kim Bum)

Post by Yukie23 on 8/1/2009, 12:14 pm

Yeah, WHOA!!!! I knew something was gonna happen between Joon and Risa!! So Eun and Bum (fangirl scream)!! Thanxs for updating ^^

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Chapter 33: Time to Go Home

Post by davinci486 on 8/23/2009, 12:34 am

The time reads 12:03 am; So Eun is already home and getting ready to go.

FLASHBACK (Time: about 10:30 pm)
“Excuse me.” So Eun excused herself after that intimate kiss.
In the powder room, So Eun locked the door then washed her face and mumbles.
“What the hell happened?” So Eun said and continued “and what are you doing Kim So Eun!?” “I’m still sober yet why did that happen?” she paused for a while then looked at herself in the mirror and touched her lips with her fingers “What was that kiss for? Did it mean something?” she finally said it.

The kiss made So Eun feel uncomfortable like having butterflies inside your stomach and she’s feeling a little dizzy after what had happen. She decided to not go back and go home. She can’t be in Japan anymore or as long as F4 or just Kim Bum is in Japan, no she can’t be in the same place with him he must be far from her – away from her. So Eun went outside to talk to the driver.

Driver: Ma’am, are you going home?
So Eun: Yes, but alone so I’m going to take a cab.
Driver: But ma’am it’s dangerous.
So Eun: It’s okay. I know Mu’ay Thai.
Driver gave up: Okay ma’am.
So Eun: Mister, if they ask you where am I – tell them I already got home but only if they ask you. Okay?
Driver: Yes ma’am. So they don’t that you are already leaving?
So Eun: Yes. By the way mister what time is it?
Driver: It’s 10:49 pm.
So Eun: Okay it’s been 10 minutes since I left them and it wouldn’t take long before they realized that I’m gone. Goodbye mister.
Driver: Be careful ma’am.
So Eun: Thanks I will.
END OF FLASHBACK

Back to present, the time reads 11:23 pm; So Eun now entering their room. As soon as she saw her two angels, she fell on her knees she became weak and cried to herself.

So Eun’s POV
‘I’m so sorry my little angels’
‘I’m such a bad mother because I never said anything about your father’
‘Then again technically he’s not your father; he just donated you guys’
‘Do you even think who he is?’
‘This vacation should not involve him and neither in the future’
‘Shit. I mess this one up’
‘What should I do now?’
End of POV

While So Eun was crying Jin Young slowly woke up as he heard that someone is crying, to his shock its no other than his mother. After a while Ga Eul also waken up. The two got out of bed and comfort their mother.

Jin Young: Mom!
Ga Eul: Why are you crying?
So Eun: Oh! I’m sorry did I wake you guys up? Mommy is not crying. No need to worry.
Jin Young: But you are crying.
Ga Eul: Mommy, you sad?
So Eun smiled genuinely: No because you are here to comfort me.

But even after saying that, So Eun can’t help but to cry more. The room was so sad by her crying and it made her two children cry with her. After a minute or two, So Eun’s crying became laughing. Her two angels looked at her confused.

Ga Eul & Jin Young: Mom? Are you okay?
So Eun: Guys, do you want to go back to Korea now?
Jin Young: Oh ow.
Ga Eul: Meaning 30 minutes?
So Eun: Oh ow? 30 minutes? What are you talking?
Jin Young: Mom, remember when you said that ‘now’ is 30 minutes after you say?
So Eun smile: Oh, so that’s what you mean? Yes. Do you want to?
Ga Eul: Why?
Jin Young: What for?
So Eun: Because as your mother, I want to spend my time with only both of you since it’s my vacation.

Jin Young & Ga Eul nodded and rushed to get ready. So Eun then went to see Mr. & Mrs. Park who are in the garden taking care of there bonsai.

Mr. Park: Why so sudden?
Mrs. Park: Aren’t you with Risa?
So Eun: Yes, I was with Risa but I want to spend my free time with my children and it’s only 2 more weeks left. So I decided to leave her with the famous F4. I think she can manage plus, I think she’s going to have a BF soon. And please allow us to go, I know you understand me.
Mr. & Mrs. Park unison: Okay.
Mrs. Park Just take care.

Back in the club, time 10:56 pm. Hyun Joong took notice of So Eun’s absence. It’s been 20 minutes.

Hyun Joong: We’re missing something.
Bum: Beside these two being cozy (Woo Bin & Risa). What else could there be?
Min Ho: You mean someone. So Eun that is.
Bum: Oh yeah! I forgot about her.

F3 search the whole club but nothing then Woo Bin & Risa starts to vomit everywhere and they needed to get out of the club before it’s too late. F3 helped Woo Bin & Risa to get to the car and ask the driver if he saw So Eun.

Driver: Sir. Ma’am So Eun already left about 20 minutes ago. She said that if you go ask about her that is the only time I will tell you. I’m sorry.
F3: It’s okay. But we need to get home fast and do you have a bucket at least for them. See that. (Pointing at Woo Bin & Risa puking in the streets)
Driver: Yes sir I have. Please hop on.

It is now 12:10 am. The car that F4 is riding smells like vomit, actually it is vomit, inside that all windows are open, Woo Bin & Risa didn’t really fail to impress F3 after hooking up and now this. As they’re approaching the mansion a cab was on the other side is leaving. They didn’t know that they cross-path with So Eun, who is inside the cab along with her kids leaving Japan.

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Re: Obsessed (Main Characters: Kim So Eun and Kim Bum)

Post by Yukie23 on 8/23/2009, 4:44 pm

Awww...no!!!! So Eun is leaving!!!! Lol@ Risa and Woo Bin. Thanks for the update though ^^

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Re: Obsessed (Main Characters: Kim So Eun and Kim Bum)

Post by azngurlz093 on 8/27/2009, 4:50 pm

run to the airport kim bum go go go

don't leave so eun

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Story?

Post by satinsta on 10/8/2009, 2:36 am

Hey where is the story continuation? Please continue! Laughing

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Chapter 34: Truth Revealed

Post by davinci486 on 10/9/2009, 9:46 pm

‘Oh it’s only almost midnight!’ Kim Bum thought as he looked at his wrist watch, usually he and the rest of F4 would go home until 5 in the morning so he was a little shock. He was inside the car with Min Ho and Hyun Joong, all three of them are sober. Also with Joon who passed out after getting inside the car and, of course, Risa who was really loud talking about stuffs after puking all over the place. F3 opened the car window because they can’t help to smell the sweet pollution rather than the vomits of Risa.

As Kim Bum feels the breeze and gaze outside, he remembered the kiss he shared with So Eun. The trail of thoughts leaves Kim Bum’s face sadness as he thought and scold himself ‘No it’s all wrong, I should apologize. She has two kids and I should have known better! It’s my fault that she left us there.’ Kim Bum shifted his thoughts to So Eun’s children and it brought smile and happiness plastered to his face as he thought ‘I bet they really have good genes! They are really good-looking kids apart from their mother maybe their father is good-looking as well. And they are adorable too.’ Kim Bum’s face is really funny looking one moment he is sad, next happy then sad again.

Kim Bum’s thought lead to his life ‘How are the kids? I suppose I can’t call them mine since we really didn’t do IT, I mean THEM. How is she? How are they?’ then he started to see similarities ‘Wait! If I guess correctly Jin Young and Ga Eul’s age are like the kids. And they give me feeling like I’m their father. ’ And felt sadness again and whine ‘I want to meet them now. 18 years is so long. ’

As Kim Bum is in his thoughts deeply, Hyun Joong and Min Ho are watching him and chuckling every time he changes the expression on his face -- they were amuse on what’s going on inside their friends head.

As Kim Bum continues to gaze outside a cab pass through them and he saw familiar figure inside it “Hey isn’t that So Eun?” Kim Bum said in a low voice as he jumped backward to really see who the passenger was. Hyun Joong and Min Ho were surprise by his action and ask him what the matter was. “Nothing.” was Kim bum’s only reply. Suddenly, out of nowhere, “That bitch!” in an upset tone. F3 looked at the person who said that. Risa.

The car stopped and the driver opened the car door for them. Risa, in an upset mood, hurried to get out leaving F3 dumbfounded. “What’s wrong with her?” said Min Ho. “Maybe a little sober, realized that she and Joon kissed” chuckled as Hyun Joong stated. “Mister thank you for the ride. And can you please give us a bucket first, so that if Joon ever wakes up to vomit there’s a place for it.” Kim Bum said to the driver before leaving them.

Inside the mansion, Risa is talking to parents and she was furious. “What just like that!?” Risa said out loud replaying on her parents about something. F3 walked with Joon and the bucket in their hands, they heard Risa shouting. And continue to walk in the living room where Risa and her parents are. Mr. Bak and Soo Jin heard Risa as well so they came down stairs to see what’s going on.

Mr. Park noticed four figures in the hall while Mrs. Park noticed two figures walking down the stairs. “Please go to your room now and let us talk about this tomorrow morning, when the sun is up.” Mr. Park stated in a calm voice to his daughter. “Go back to your room everything’s fine” Mrs. Park instruct Soo Jin and her husband. “What kind of shit is this let them here me.” Risa said in a more upset voice. Risa turned and see who the person her stepmother is instructing is; she chuckled to see F4, Mr. Bak and her cousin Soo Jin.

“You know I hate F4, because they did not only ruin my best friends’ life but also mine. Mr. Kim Bum to be specific. ” Risa starts to roar her anger. “I hate Soo Jin, just now, for not telling me about her husband who happens to be F4’s manager. I hate Mr. Bak because he brought them here. I hate F4!!!!” Risa was crying her heart out. Kim Bum confused and ask “Why?” and it Risa grew more hatred towards him “Are you really that blind? Can’t you see that they are your children? Or you need something as a proof?” She said. “Wait, don’t tell us So Eun is the girl 6 years ago who-” Hyun Joong reply for his friend Kim Bum who is in mental shock right now. “Blah, blah, blah, the girl who ask for Kim Bum’s sperm! Happy!? Yes she’s that girl! The girl who you guys always and give the name of ‘the girl from 6-years ago‘ and I hate that I kissed that guy who passed out after getting inside the car.” Risa finish her statement and grabbed the bucket in Kim Bum’s hand. As her face is facing down, she start to vomit and comment at the same time “Did you guys know So Eun’s a painter? She has a future ahead of her but you ruined It.” and without any sign the she’s finish, she fell asleep on the bucket.

“Guess she heard me talking about So Eun’s past, changing the story a little bit and not talk about So Eun’s great talent.” Mr. Park stated and ordered the maids to go fix his daughter.

“Go now to your room it’s late.” Mrs. Park instruct all of them while Mr. Park was about to go back to the room Kim Bum who was staring at nothing ask “Where is So Eun?” in trembling voice. “I’m sorry son; she just left the moment you return.” Mr. Park replied. “What do you mean?” Kim Bum said while lifting his head to Mr. Park, “She left Japan to go back to Korea, guess she can’t handle to see you.” With that said Kim Bum felt empty and guilty that how could he not see it, see everything was in place already and he was the only one left to figure things out.
She avoided him not because she has kids, but because he might figure it out and he’ll take them away from her – her happiness, her life now.

“How could I be so stupid?” Kim Bum said as he collapse on the floor while Hyun Joong and Min Ho could do nothing but stare and be dumbfounded. Joon, on the other hand, didn’t help either because he was knocked out.

Then everything was in silence.

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Meanwhile in So Eun’s part, back in Korea in Gangwon-do to be specific. “Mommy who are we going to visit?” Ga Eul asked her mother who was holding her and Jin Young while carrying there luggage. “Grandmother...” So Eun replied to the confused Ga Eul. “Grandmother?” Jin Young ask again. “Yes, my mother meaning your grandmother.” So Eun said as she patted Jin Young and Ga Eul’s head while kneeling down. “Although I don’t know if she’ll like our presence...” So Eun said and stood up. As soon as So Eun stands up, the door of the house open and notice her figure “Who’s it?” a woman in her 60’s questioned So Eun. So Eun signed and thought ‘There’s no backing out now.’





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Re: Obsessed (Main Characters: Kim So Eun and Kim Bum)

Post by davinci486 on 10/9/2009, 9:47 pm

Sorry for late update..

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Re: Obsessed (Main Characters: Kim So Eun and Kim Bum)

Post by Yukie23 on 10/10/2009, 3:54 pm

Woah...Kim Bum knows now!!! Yes!!! Can't wait to see what will happen, and don't worry about the late update ^^

Wonder what So Eun's mom will do??

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Mrs. Kim, HwangBo & Paintings

Post by davinci486 on 10/28/2009, 4:39 am

Previous chapter: Meanwhile in So Eun’s part, back in Korea in Gangwon-do to be specific. “Mommy who are we going to visit?” Ga Eul asked her mother who was holding her and Jin Young while carrying their luggage. “Grandmother...” So Eun replied to the confused Ga Eul. “Grandmother?” Jin Young ask again. “Yes, my mother meaning your grandmother.” So Eun said as she patted Jin Young and Ga Eul’s head while kneeling down. “Although I don’t know if she’ll like our presence...” So Eun said and stood up. As soon as So Eun stands up, the door of the house open and notice her figure “Who’s it?” a woman in her 60’s questioned So Eun. So Eun signed and thought ‘There’s no backing out now.’

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“Why are you back?” So Eun’s mother questioned her daughter with a sharp tone while the four of them sat on the sofa in the living room. Ga Eul and Jin Young are staring at the old lady, they seem scared of her. “Umma… I ah-” So Eun started but was cut off when a lady older her by five years or so came down stairs shouting “Sungmo (Aunty)!!” So Eun turned her head to that person, then the lady stopped and looked at the children then to her aunt then to So Eun.

With wide eyes “So Eun-ah!!” she shouts with excitement.

BAM!

The lady hugged So Eun immediately the moment she saw her. So Eun, on the other hand, was shocked to see the lady, leaving with her mother “uhm.., HwangBo-uunie.. You’re here? Why?” she confusedly asked. HwangBo is So Eun’s only girl cousin and the rest are men, she and her are pretty much sisters since HwangBo is an only child. “I’m here because umma never stopped nagging on me not having a husband” with that she laugh wholeheartedly, “AHEM” Mrs. Kim clearing her throat and for the 2 young ladies to notice her.

“As I was saying, why are you back?” said Mrs. Kim, So Eun was about to speak when HwangBo answers for her “What’s with the attitude sungmo? She’s your daughter.” “Last time I check I disowned her. And keep your but off; this is none your business.” Mrs. Kim in an angry tone, as she shoo HwangBo off. “Yah! Sungmo! You can’t do that. You only have her now.” protested HwangBo.

While that’s happening Ga Eul pulled down So Eun’s clothes “Umma! I’m scared. Let’s go back to Seoul.” She then started to cry while Jin Young comforts her “Ga Eul don’t cry” and ask his mom too “Umma, it’s so late can’t we go to sleep? I think we’re too tired, I mean Ga Eul, me and you.” So Eun then checked the time 3:56 it says. “Omo! It’s 3:56 in the morning? Oh I’m sorry baby.” So Eun then turned her head from Jin Young to her mother and cousin that are sort of fighting “Umma, HwangBo unnie I’m back because I need to tell you something but first let my children sleep please?” The two of them just nodded.

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It is now 4:26 in the morning; So Eun just finished to lullabies her babies and got them to sleep to her old room. So Eun then take a quick look on her old room, she misses her room so much that she felt a little pain on her chest. She let a small smile crept into her face as she approaches a familiar painting that was sitting in the corner of her room. And as soon as she pick it up, memories of the old days flashing onto her where she was young and foolish. “Nothing has changed, don’t worry I didn’t touch any of them.” A familiar voice talked behind So Eun. “Ah, unnie, I just remember something.” So Eun turned her head to HwangBo who is standing at the door while holding the painting in her hands. “Oh that painting, I think it was when you were about to graduate right?” HwangBo ask her “Yes, about three months before I graduate – they say the theme was ‘Inspiration’ and this sort of came out.” So Eun replied with a small laugh.

“Change topic, are they really yours?” HwangBo in serious tone narrowing her eyes to So Eun and then to Ga Eul and Jin Young, who are sound asleep. So Eun just nod. “Well then, I loved to meet them, but first tell us the real story. We’ll wait for you downstairs even though it’s freakin’ four o’clock something.” HwangBo said and then leave.

So Eun then kissed Ga Eul and Jin Young’s forehead and headed downstairs. So Eun found her mother and Hwanbo both seated at the sofa together. As she sat and tells the whole real story and the encounter with the fatehr, her mother was in no condition to describe while HwangBo is just shocked, excited, and sad at the same time. So Eun then said “Just let us be here for at least a week or I can make it three days just please?” So Eun can’t hold it anymore so she cried and cried until “No dear…” her mother told her, So Eun looked up “You’re staying here for good.” “What? Umma what are you saying?” So Eun couldn’t believe what she’s hearing “She’s saying you’re going to be here and we’ll take care of you, my niece and nephew FOR GOOD.” HwangBo state loud and clear, especially the ‘for good’.

So Eun process everything then came back to her sense “I can’t I only have a week now” she said. “What do you mean?” HwangBo confused. “I work…” So Eun said while raising both her eyebrows. “So?” HwangBo said like she doesn’t care “So I have to return to Seoul” So eun said irritated. “Honey just quit besides we all know that it is painting you love to do” HwangBo fight back. “I can’t just quit, I love my job and it is a descent job” So Eun protested. “Okay then what is it?” HwangBo raising an eyebrow. “A kindergarten teacher” So Eun in low voice. “Okay here goes for you to be able to not see their father, because you just run away from him and GOD kissed him, you need to be somewhere else and not Seoul – okay I think we ARE DONE. No buts.” HwangBo reassured So Eun. “Chagiya, I’m so sorry for all that I’ve done.” Mrs. Kim apologized to her daughter “I promise I’ll take care of my grandchildren and loved them as much as I loved you.” she continued. “Chagiya quit your job in Seoul and start to paint again, okay?” Mrs. Kim ended her conversation with So Eun and left to sleep. “Come on So Eun-ah, let’s sleep with your babies I’m so tired and I think you are too.” HwangBo said while grabbing So Eun’s wrist.

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“I did what!?” Risa yell her father while he explains to her that she said the last night to all of them that will cost her if So Eun found out about it. “Shit! I’m so dead.” Risa starts to panic and was sweating; Risa and her father are talking in the living room alone but when she started t yell it attracted five people “Yes, you are dead.” One said of those five people that are now eavesdropping. Risa looked to where the voice came from, and was frozen to her seat.

“I think our friend here needs a proper explanations and fast.” Continued by the man who now stands infront of Risa. Risa , on the other hand, swallowed hard. ‘Oh no I’m really going to die today.’ she thought.

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Oct. 27, 2009
4:29pm

Hi readers I finally update, yah it’s because tomorrow Oct. 28, 2009 is my death ceremony. Confuse why, it’s because tomorrow is the day I will see my grades *GOD PLEASE HELP ME, I DON’T WANT TO DIE YET* so yeah I’m updating just in case I will fail so that if my mom won’t allow me to use the computer for at least until the 2nd sem is done so yeah here it is. Sorry no SoEul/BumSso at the moment.

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Re: Obsessed (Main Characters: Kim So Eun and Kim Bum)

Post by Yukie23 on 10/31/2009, 1:36 pm

No way!! HwangBo is in this!!?? YAY!!!

I jope everything turned out well with your grades, thanks for the update either way ^^

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Chapter 37: Alive but Dead

Post by davinci486 on 11/3/2009, 9:18 pm

Shibuya, Japan 9:36 am

Risa woke up with a very painful headache and hear vision is still blurry, she covers her mouth as she yawn with her left hand at the same time rub her eyes with the other one. ‘GOD! My head hurts. What time is it anyway? I have no idea wh-‘ she thought then “Wait!! Where am I!?” she ask yelling as it echoes the whole room and out of nowhere a voice answered her “At your room miss.” Risa turn to look where the voice is coming from “Huh? Can you repeat where I again?” Risa ask as if not believing where she was to the maid who answers back “You’re at your ROOM miss.” This time the maid made it firmer on the ROOM.
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“Okay, how about you? Why are you here?” Risa hissed and looked at the maid with curious piercing eyes. “Your father said that he needs to see you at his office when you are fully awake and taken a shower. And wear this miss as your father instructed and no buts and ifs.” After that she handed the outfit to Risa then bowed and left. ‘Okay that was soo awkward!!’ she thought as she stared at the door. “Let me see you properly”
Outfit = http://www.ecrater.com/product.php?pid=2950679
“Now I know what she means by no buts and ifs, I would never wear this kind of dress -- it’s too plain.” She said to herself.
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Back in Gangwon-do, So Eun is sound asleep while her two children are at the kitchen. They were called by Mrs. Kim to eat breakfast with her and HwangBo after they got out of bed. It is 9 o’clock in the morning for crying out loud.

“Eat up” said Mrs. Kim “You don’t want to die in huger do you?” HwangBo continued. Jin Youn and Ga Eul just stared the foods that are prepared for them. Korean pancakes (http://www.flickr.com/photos/sonyam/2456124594/) and Bimbimbap with many side dishes (http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3228/2402512075_bd99a57466.jpg).

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Risa, now wearing the dress that her father instructed her to wear, is skipping joyful first to the kitchen to check if her cousin is already cooking, and to her surprise it was her cousin-in-law that was cooking “Oh good morning Hyun Jae-sshi!” Risa greeted while Mr. Bak gave her a look and just a look. “Okay” Risa reponded to herself. Just then her cousin came in and talk to her husband “Honey, did you already put salt and peper?” Soo Jin ask her husband while her husband look at her to look at Risa. “Oh! Risa……..uhm, uncle is waiting for you at the living room.” Soo Jin stated. “Okay, but I thoug- Okay never mind.” Risa left after that.

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So Eun woke up feeling light after the confrontation with her mother, she then took a long bath and dress herself.
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“Okay! Aja!” So Eun grinning after changing. “I’ll quit my job and start a new life here. I just need to talk to the kids.” So Eun stated “I’m not running away or anything, it’s just that I’m not ready to face him.” With that So Eun went to the dining room.

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Risa, on the other hand, sat down at their sofa (http://www.betterimprovement.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/11/flair-sofa.jpg) while her father looking outside the window. “Dad, what is it this time?” Risa ask her father what is the matter for him to ask her to wear a mini dress she usually doesn’t wear and for the whole meeting thing. “Well… Listen to what I’ll tell you and just shut your mouth, after I finish that is the time you’ll react.” Mr. Park firmly said to Risa still looking outside.

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“Umma!” Ga Eul run to her mother seeing her walking inside the dining room. “Ga Eul why?” So Eun worried what happen earlier and gave HwangBo a look. “Nothing happen gees.” HwangBo hissed. “They want us to eat.” Jin Young explain to So Eun “Then why is their food here?” So Eun looking at the prepared foods. “Because dear they’re afriad of us, they think we’re strangers.” Mrs. Kim walked out from the kitchen “and you still haven’t introduce me to my grandchildren” she continued. “Yeah!” HwangBo agreeing to Mrs. Kim. “Aw. Sorry about that.” She bowed her head as she apologized. So Eun turn her kids to Mrs. Kim and HwangBo “Kids meet you grandmother and your Aunty HwangBo.” So Eun said to them. “Please to meet you grandma! Aunty!” Jin Young bowed his head and then kiss them while Ga Eul looked at So Eun pouting. “It’s okay honey they won’t bite. They always give love. And candies, your favorite.” So Eun said with an assuring smile to Ga Eul. Ga Eul then look away from her mom to where her grandma, HwangBo and her brother is; she then do the same with what Jin Young done earlier and everyone was happy. It was just 10:30 am.

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“I did what!?” Risa yell her father while he explains to her that she said the last night to all of them that will cost her if So Eun found out about it. “Shit! I’m so dead.” Risa starts to panic and was sweating; Risa and her father are talking in the living room alone but when she started t yell it attracted five people “Yes, you are dead.” One said of those five people that are now eavesdropping. Risa looked to where the voice came from, and was frozen to her seat.

“I think our friend here needs a proper explanations and fast.” Continued by the man who now stands infront of Risa. Risa , on the other hand, swallowed hard. ‘Oh no I’m really going to die today.’ she thought.

Min ho was standing infront of Risa while Mr. Bak and F3 are at the back. ‘So that’s why he gave me a look this morning.’ Risa thought of the kitchen incident. ‘GOD! Look at Kim Bum he’s like dead.’ She was looking at Kim Bum then looked away when he noticed. “Aheheheh, okay I’ll explain everything you want to know.” Risa in shaking voice.

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11:15 am
Nov. 4, 2009

I’m going to stop only up to here. I know cliffhanger, right? But I’m banned to used the net due to falling grades and so I’ll update at the start of my class because I can only update if I escape. So yeah sorry.

AN: Please someone adopt me. As in for real. Or add me up facebook search: Larieza Camille Mae Valdez and I’ll tell you everything. Hahah. I want to die. I hate my life.

(.!__!.)

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Re: Obsessed (Main Characters: Kim So Eun and Kim Bum)

Post by th1rd3ye on 11/21/2009, 6:44 am

UNNI!!!! GAMBATE! =D

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Post by Yukie23 on 11/21/2009, 11:49 am

Don't worry...this will get better. I'm really sorry, I hope that everything turns out ^^
Thanks for the update though!!

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